Never too old to learn. 

活到老，学到老

My family

Hello, I’m Betty! I’m from a Chinese nuclear family. There are four people in my family-my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father’s name is Sheng Xx. He’s xx years old. He’s a public officer. He works in an office. He likes playing computer games. My mother’s name is Chen Xx. She’s xx years old. She’s a teacher. She works at a school. My name is Sheng Chenyu. I’m twelve years old. I’m a student of SYFLS. My sister’s name is Sheng Xx. She’s two years old. She’s cute.

I love my family very much. My family love me too. We’re a happy family.

生宸宇 Betty七（一）A班

张丹妮老师评语：总-分-总，文章结构十分清晰，先简单介绍自己的家庭情况，再分别介绍各位家庭成员，最后表达情感，进行总结，行文流畅，逻辑清楚。

My friend’s family

This is my friend’s family. Her name is Linda. She is 11 years old. She is Chinese, and she is from Guangxi. She has long black hair, small eyes and big ears. She likes reading. This is her father, and his name is Charles. He is 40 years old. Her father is a soldier who works in the army. This is her mother. Her name is Diana. She is 38 years old. She is a housewife. This is her little sister. Her name is Mary, and she is a cute baby. She likes playing with toys. What a happy family!

胡鹏翼 Penny 七（一）B班

徐瑞璟老师评语：Penny的短文用词准确，内容充实，将朋友Linda的家庭生动形象的展现在大家眼前。