SYFLS Monthly English | Showing Board | 七年级(2)班
作者:swsy 时间:2020-09-30 14:57 浏览次数:0

Never too old to learn. 

活到老,学到老


My Family

Hello, I am Tom. I have got a wife, and her name is Elizabeth. I think she is a tall and beautiful girl. We have got two daughters and one son. Jane is my daughter, and my son-in-law is Carter. This is Mary Smith. She is my daughter too. Her husband is Bob Smith. They have two children and their names are Tim and Sally. Jack is my only son. I have four grandsons. Their names are Peg, Tim, Sally and Jimmy. We are a happy family.

陈其昊 Qihao七(二)A班

徐瑞璟老师评语:Qihao准确理解了课文内容,理清了文中人物的关系,以课文中爷爷的视角重新介绍了Mary Smith的家庭。语言流畅,内容充实。


My friend

Mark is my friend. His Chinese name is Ma Ke. He is 12 years old. He is from Russia, and he is Russian. He can speak Russian very well. His favorite subject is Music, because it is very interesting. He also likes sports. He thinks it is relaxing. He often plays sports with his classmates after school. Reading is his hobby too. He likes reading books very much. This is Mark. Do you want to be his friend?

张家睿 Rosa七(二)B班

张丹妮老师评语:本文灵活运用不同的句式介绍朋友的三个兴趣爱好,用词较为准确,内容详实,描写生动。