Never too old to learn. 

活到老，学到老

Jane’s Family

Hello, my name is Jane. I will tell you something about my family. Now look at my family photo. This is my husband. His name is Carter. He is a manager of a hotel. We have a lovely daughter, Peg. She is a student in No.7 Primary School. She is a great girl, but sometimes…well, you know. This is my sister. Her name is Mary Smith. She is a supermom, and next to her is her husband, Bob Smith. He is my brother-in-law. He is a wonderful doctor. He works in a hospital. They have two children. One is a boy, Tim, the other is a girl, Sally. They are my nephew and niece. They are at the same school with Peg. Jack is my brother. He is a writer and he works at home. I often read his books and it’s very interesting. The woman near him is his wife. She is my sister-in-law. They have a son, Jimmy. He is just 2 years old. He is very cute. Look at these two people. They are my parents, Elizabeth and Tom. They are retired now, so they always play with Jimmy at home. We are a happy family. We love each other.

陈志宏 七（四）A   

彭潇洁老师评语：用词生动，表达到位，内容充实。

My family

This is my family. There are five family members. They are my grandmother, father, mother, my sister and me.

This is my father. He is forty-six years old. He is an architect. He designs buildings and he has a hotel in Sanya. He always works either at the company or at home.

My mother is a housewife. She often takes care of my sister at home. She is forty years old now. She is smart and hardworking.

My grandmother is very gentle and kind. She likes cooking delicious food. We all love her very much.

My sister is so young. She is 4 years old and she is in the kindergarten now. She is very clever. She can do simple math problems such as addition and subtraction.

My name is Maggie. I’m a middle school student and I’m in a foreign language school now. I love this school because I can study different kinds of knowledge such as languages, subjects and hobbies. I take part in an extra-curricular activity-Oriental Dance. I like it very much.

We are an extended family. We love each other and our life is full of joy!

陈心瑜 Maggie七（四）B班

周月玄老师评语：词汇量丰富，内容充实，文字细腻。陈同学优秀的文笔描述了自己温馨的家庭，是一篇值得学习的好文章。