Never too old to learn. 

活到老，学到老

There are four people in my family. My father, mother, sister and me. My father is a manager and he works in a big company. He is very hard-working. My mother is a housewife and she helps me with study. She likes reading books. My sister is a student from SYFLS and she is good at English. She is very clever. My sister and I both like swimming. As for me, I’m a student as well. I am in the same school as my sister. I like reading books and playing the guitar. I have a happy family.

朱柏毓 七（五）A班

蔡悦老师评语：用词准确丰富，如hard-working, housewife, company, both, the same as等；，内容完整，介绍了家中四口人的工作和爱好，但是如果能介绍家庭成员的外貌和性格就更好了；语法正确，运用了连词，将简单句串联起来，读起来朗朗上口。继续加油！

My Family

There are four people in my family. They are my father, mother, my sister and I.

My father’s English name is Jeff. He works in the airport. He is the vice president of the airport. He always cooks delicious food for us.

My mother’s English name is Ann. She works in a cargo agent company. She is general manager. My mother likes to travel very much.

My sister’s English name is Rachel. She is just one year old. She is naughty, but she is very cute.

My name is Grace. I’m twelve years old. I am a pupil. This is my family. I love my family.

段奕辰 七（五）B班

马骥老师评语：行文流畅清晰，介绍了家庭每一位成员，词汇丰富，学以致用，有真情实感。