SYFLS Monthly English | Showing Board | 七年级(6)班
作者:swsy 时间:2020-09-30 15:06 浏览次数:0

Never too old to learn. 

活到老,学到老

My family

Look at this family tree. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I. My father and mother are thirty-eight years old. They were born in the same year. My father is a driver at a station. He is very busy every day. My mother is a housewife at home. She likes to cook. We are all Chinese, and we are a nuclear family. I am a student in Sanya Foreign Language School. I am learning at school from Monday to Friday. I have a lovely family.

陈可颐 七(六)A班

马骥老师评语:结构清晰,描述细致,将知识和生活有机结合起来。全文字迹工整,学习态度认真。


Hi everyone, my name is Mary. I’m a 13-year-old girl from SYFLS. I’d like to introduce my family members. There are four people in my family and they are my mother, father, sister and me. My mother is the master of our home. She is 47 years old but she looks beautiful and young. She is a manager of a big company named China Telecom. She likes playing with her telephone and talking with me.

My father is older than my mother and now he is 54 years old. He is a lawyer. He has bought us a house in Sanya but now he works in Haikou. My father is a kind man and good at English.

At last, I have a sister. She is 26 years old. She doesn’t have a job now because she is studying in Beijing and getting her master’s degree. She looks so beautiful too and her English is excellent. She has been to Belgium to study. This is my nuclear family. I love them very much and they love me too!

陈彦羽 七(六)B班

蔡悦老师评语:词汇短语非常丰富且使用恰当,如introduce, member, master, young, company, China Telecom, play with, lawyer, good at, master’s degree, excellent, Belgium, nuclear; 语法正确,注意了单三,复数和介词。内容丰富,介绍了三位家庭成员,但是美中不足的是,没有介绍自己呀。继续加油!